You didn’t speak very much – you need more than a sentence per point to make a case for your top song. I didn’t get the sense that you felt convicted about the greatness of your song. I also like the song a lot and know where you’re coming from. You were very brave to go first! Good job. ~ Matt Litchfield
I really like this song as well! I like how you also included its popularity in your decision, because the popularity of the song should effect how far up on your list of top songs that it should be.Only comment, maybe a little more elaboration on each appeal, but good job!
A little bit of everything was incorporated, but you need to defend the song, not explain it. Convince me to love this song and want to go out and buy it. All around, very nice effort<3
I love this song too! It's great, but to be honest you didn't help to make me think it was the best, you simply explained what it was and what made you like it. If you truly think its THE best song, you need to put passion into your defense. This was more so an explanation than a defense, imagine someone tried to tell you that this song sucked, what would you say?
I like your song choice; you had good explanations of the speaker’s feelings. You could have put more of your own persuasion in it rather than the speaker’s.
You didn’t speak very much – you need more than a sentence per point to make a case for your top song. I didn’t get the sense that you felt convicted about the greatness of your song. I also like the song a lot and know where you’re coming from. You were very brave to go first! Good job. ~ Matt Litchfield
ReplyDeleteYou could have talked some more about pathos and logos. Also the presentation could have been a little bit longer.
ReplyDeleteThe song seems very familiar to me but alittle too popular for my liking. Other than that nice job.
ReplyDeleteYour song choice was good, but you need to have multiple examples, not one of each.
ReplyDeleteI really like this song as well! I like how you also included its popularity in your decision, because the popularity of the song should effect how far up on your list of top songs that it should be.Only comment, maybe a little more elaboration on each appeal, but good job!
ReplyDeleteA little bit of everything was incorporated, but you need to defend the song, not explain it. Convince me to love this song and want to go out and buy it. All around, very nice effort<3
ReplyDeleteEthos was not right should be your credibility not the speakers, but good job going first.
ReplyDeleteI love this song too! It's great, but to be honest you didn't help to make me think it was the best, you simply explained what it was and what made you like it. If you truly think its THE best song, you need to put passion into your defense. This was more so an explanation than a defense, imagine someone tried to tell you that this song sucked, what would you say?
ReplyDeleteDid a very good job including everything!
ReplyDeleteGood job going first! Also great song. I liked how you incorporated how popular this song is to you and most other people in your explanation.
ReplyDeleteNeeds a little more explaining to really help us understand why it is your top song.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good, did a good job explaing different parts of it and nice job going first.
ReplyDeleteYou should use yourself as the speaker, not the songwriter. Also, speak up and slow down.
ReplyDeleteI like your song choice; you had good explanations of the speaker’s feelings. You could have put more of your own persuasion in it rather than the speaker’s.
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